Wednesday, 6 August 2014

Leo Chases His Dreams!

 
WHAT:
We have started writing narrative stories this term. The first week we wrote about when a cat wanted to be a dog. He was bored with his life.

SO WHAT:

NOW WHAT:
What I could improve on is describing the characters, so the audience gets a picture in their head of what the characters look like.

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