For writing we have been learning to write an argument using the writing process. The topic was “Are Devices Taking Over Our Lives”.
Something I did really well in my writing was connecting my ideas to the next paragraph.
Here is a section of my writing that shows this.
In addition traveling with horses mustn't be good for your own health and safety, think about how easy it could be to tip in your carriage or if the horse has fleas you could easily get them.